5.6 "Heart of Darkness"

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh, he's doing a time skip thing. I knew it.

A story inside a story inside a story. Confusing, like flashes before your eyes.

Thats a good Danielle that you've written.

Very emotional scene with Robert and Roussseau. Good work.

Finished, Good episode if a bit confusing. Interesting to see a flashback of Rousseau and the DHARMA. I can see your growing in confidnece and venturing further into different ways to do an episode.

Noone else seemed to really be confused about what is going on. I guess when reading it, yeah, you could be confused, but if it was played on on screen it would be more easily understood. Jin didn't time skip. He was actually somehow transported back to 88 then sent back to the regular time along with Montand. How? We don't know yet exactly. It will be explained later. It was very much like the Constant where the whole episode was set in 88. It was meant to be a little confusing, but not really.

I'm glad you liked the Dawn Treader thing and picked up on it. I also like how you liked the Rousseau Robert scene. It is my favorite of the episode and shows that yes, Danielle is a crazy woman, but with good reason. It shows that no, Rousseau didn't kill her whole team, she only killed Robert. It shows that Ben was the Brennen guy she talked about in the "distress transmission" and why when she found Ben in Henry Gale's balloon that she couldn't tell Sayid where she knew him from because it would make her look crazy.

As for Jin's English... he understood Michael and talked to him very well in 4.13 so... I think I need to say that I gave him small easy to know lines. Now, as for him understanding all the words that others were saying to him, that isn't really important as long as he got the jist of what they were trying to say enough for him to answer with no more than a 6 word reply. I think Jin can understand more than we think he can... I took a liberty and made it that way.

Ok, I guess you've done a little research on the Jin thing and I was in a bit of a rush to finish it. But your right it would be easier to understand on screen.

On to Ep7

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